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Done Letting You Win

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Done Letting You Win

Every memory is like a
broken piece of glass.
No matter how much I want to,
I can never look back.
Day by day
I count the scars,
remembering all the times 
you broke my heart.
I thought you were 
perfect for me,
now it seems we
aren't meant to be.
I try my best 
not to care,
but when I walk 
down the halls,
I see you there.
Everything we had
stops me dead
in my tracks,
and at that moment,
I want you back.
I see the love
still lingering in your eyes.
I know that must
be hard to disguise.
I'm really sorry for
doing this to you,
but you deserve it
for all the pain you
put me through.
I'm sorry for the way
that this had to end,
but you won't get me back,
I'm done letting you win.

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  1. Date: 1/16/2010 1:15:00 PM

    Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 I love you girl, and all your poems, keep letting it out!

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 11:06:00 AM

    Wow very very good. Heartbreak is sooo sad!

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 11:05:00 AM

    i no the feeling people want to hurt you don't let sweetie keep fighting

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 11:02:00 AM

    Oh my gawd. you just broke my heart. i love this. huggs, kisses. speak my heart.

  1. Date: 1/15/2010 10:47:00 AM

    Don't let them win my friend! Great write

  1. Date: 1/14/2010 4:46:00 AM

    I have enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Serenity. May you have a wonderful inspiration filled day. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 10:48:00 AM

    ABOUT MY MOM ANY WAYS srry bumped caps

  1. Date: 1/13/2010 10:44:00 AM

    i feel this way alot, and you put it into words =) great write you should be proud.