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That Tongue

Fundamentally, 
It was shock she experienced this morning.
Perturbed, 
With the ease of his tongue, 
To weave such vernal vocabulary
That last night
Had raised the ridged nap of her plush fabric


Consumed
With this sensory depravatiion
The desire for his shuttling
And the warp and weft of his absent tongue

His pure spun  ability to heddle her 
So bespoke the silken twists trailing in her mind
Keeping her twill pure
And clean of the plisse
That would otherwise de-sheer

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  1. Date: 1/22/2010 11:05:00 AM

    Super piece loopylu, sexy and sensuous > wanting and willing >> James

  1. Date: 1/10/2010 10:43:00 PM

    With this one, you are reminding me of those poets who I know are writing really well but my feeble mind just can't quite wrap my mond around it! I guess that is why I stay out of the free verse arena for the most part. You are very very creative!! I hope to see more and more of your work (especially those ones whose meanings come easily to me). Thanks for your sweet comments today. This poem had a great sexy feeling to it. Luv, Andrea