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Don't give up my Sister

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Don't give up my Sister

Don't give up my Sister
Oh! That is the only word that can
descible how you feel
No u don't
Trying to tell urself things will
get better

Giving up on everything
I know u can get though this
Vent on what happen to you
Earn ur family trust again

My dear
You and I know it's not going
be easy. But I want u to know that.
I have faith in u
Everything is going get better
You just have to believe

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  1. Date: 1/6/2010 7:58:00 AM
    A inspiring way to encourage someone who is down. Nicely done. ~ Carrie