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  1. Date: 3/20/2010 12:07:00 AM
    Dear, Mary, I hope you are healed from this period of your life by now. I bet you are doing better now, right? And thanks for reading my poetry today. May you have an inspiring poetic weekend. LUv, Andrea

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 7:21:00 PM
    Indeed. We are never alone. Very sad and painful, but well written poem. I do want to add that I am glad you survived and found the healing path, because it is not necessarily true that death frees one from torment. I believe that after death, what is on our mind, our thoughts, our feelings, the state of our spirit remain, because it is only the body that dies and goes to dust. The spirit lives on. It is better to heal here in this life. I wish you the best. Happy new year! Caroline.

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 7:04:00 PM
    Thanks for this expresses so much the way I have felt...Marty

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 1:59:00 PM
    Dark write but truly makes one think deeply, Mary! I am so glad you've passed that! Beautifully written! Peace, Audrey

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 1:32:00 PM
    I am glad you had your writing Mary while you were going through the difficult times in your life. You have written some gems, and the dark ones will always be there, roll on spring and summer, and we shall see you bud and bloom before our eyes >> James

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 5:32:00 AM
    We all go through hard times and emotionally difficult times. Writing helps some of us cope. Some of us can feel the pain and weep with the writer in some of these writes. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Thanks for stoppping by and commenting on my poem "Tulips". I think nearly every state has been touched by the cold and I felt that I needed a touch of spring. Sara

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 5:18:00 PM
    in response to your * note : i write for the same 2 reasons. it is my only sense of true expressipn, emotions revealed soley on paper, and maybe whos evers eyes cross it will find some sort of connection. in response to your poem, dark : but relatable. well written, i found myself to get lost in the same feeling, your writing touched very close to a time period i struggled through. in my opinion writing is the best medicine and posting it is the best advantage.

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 5:18:00 PM
    That is a very dark,Mary. I'm glad you put the explanatory note at the end. I would have been worried. thanks for sharing it.soup mail

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 5:03:00 PM
    Dark densities of our minds, tend to create dark densities in our lives. I know from where you have come Mary. In these days of which you speak. Venting them into the atmosphere is a very good way to get rid of them. Sincerely, Love, Moses