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  1. Date: 1/5/2010 1:34:00 PM
    This well written piece will apply to many out there, no point in hanging about unhappy, when one can be free to live >> James

  1. Date: 1/5/2010 11:16:00 AM
    I really wanted you to tease the idea of "pretend lovers" even more so. The title drew me immediately. Felt the somewhat angst and feeling of solitude. Thanks for sharing, Mary.

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 10:10:00 PM
    This is a very concise way to express when it's over, it's over. A good read, mary, and thanks as always for your comments. andrea

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 4:54:00 PM
    Wonderful and powerful words from u tonight Mary... can relate so very well.. thankxxx for sharing these priceless gems of wisdom... blessings... luv.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 1/4/2010 4:51:00 PM
    Yes I concur, better to end the obvious pain than be bound by a pretending mind, and heartless game.A very clear message, Mary. Sincerely, Love, Moses