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The River’s Flow

Lyrical currents,
Composed by the rough rock bed:
Streaming...serenades.

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  1. Date: 1/7/2010 9:27:00 AM

    Beautiful Haiku...good luck in the contest...Marty

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 11:31:00 AM

    oh!...Happy New Year!!!!

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 11:30:00 AM

    wow!...genius!!!!!!!...as always Raul....your poetry is more amazing....i haven't been here in a while but your poetry keeps climbing higher and higher...wonderful write!....love always, Maryam

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 10:05:00 AM

    Wonderful words, Raul, hope u enter it in Brian's contest Flow River Flow... wonderful imagery also.. my entry is Mysterious Waters .. hope the Soup site updates this week for 2010 ... looking forward to a new year of reading your poetry.. and may your new year be filled with blessings... luv... creativeness... friendships... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 8:23:00 AM

    Perfect !!!!!!!

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 7:42:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Raul.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 4:18:00 AM

    I love Rivers,,this River is exceptional..its filled with Lyrical Serenades indeed..EXCELLENT--Charma

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 3:36:00 AM

    Beautiful sounds that are produced. Great expressive Haiku. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara