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puttin' out the tree...

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puttin' out the tree...

takin' down the Christmas tree,
what an awful mess!;
needles scattered here and there,
a pain in the butt, i must confess!

tangled up in lights i fall,
ornaments crash to the floor;
a faceful of pine i'm kissin',
i couldn't ask for more!

no one attempts to help me,
some had the nerve to laugh;
i'm smellin' like pine and funky sap,
boy, do i need a bath!

a delight you were for the season,
on the curbside you must go;
next year, it's back to the tree lot,
once more your beauty will glow!






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  1. Date: 1/15/2010 9:13:00 PM
    your poem have a sweet-hearted humor to them. they are all enjoyable to read

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 4:05:00 AM
    After many battles (defeated) I might add, I have resorted to an artifical one. Believe it or not, mine had started to shed and I battle putting it back in the box. I guess we will just have to except thegood with the bad. Great Poem! Milton. Lainie

  1. Date: 1/2/2010 8:01:00 PM
    that was my mantra today...good one! BG

  1. Date: 1/2/2010 6:50:00 PM
    Milton~ You always make me laugh!Great write! Love Laura :)

  1. Date: 1/2/2010 5:15:00 PM
    funny, good one, I had to quit the messy ones.