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"Rut"

A maddening re-tune this flip-optimist.
Placid savant of scowl repeated.
Thickset, daunt in idle, overly pist.

Identical figuring head of lists.
Circuit loops to retreat.
A maddening re-tune, this flip-optimist.

Brave speculating his death-mix.
Offspring"s statements over slipped.
Thickset, daunt in Idle, overly pist.

Color of choosier brown the analyst.
Saturates sometime smile.
A maddening re-tune, this flip-optimist.

Lucidity reminds this Alchemist,
of dreams, ink wet for keeping.
Thickset, daunt in idle, overly pist.

Wit serpentine, spooling a cyrisalist.
The mystic, realizing the trick
A maddening re-tune, this flip-optimist
Thickset, daunt in idle, overly pist.

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  1. Date: 12/22/2009 6:49:00 AM

    Hi, my friend, you have very sharp and crisp imageries, I should like to hear you spoon each syllable on your tongue ... what delicious melodies the verbs would make. Very modern, very good.

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 4:23:00 PM

    Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Johnathon. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Carol