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Snowflakes fall outside my window

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Snowflakes fall outside my window

Snowflakes fall outside my window,
scattering in the winter air,
piling high, reaching for the sky,
all i can do is look out and stare

raindrops fall outside my window,
dripping down like soft tears,
pitter, patter, what a sound,
to listen in and hear

Sunshine falls outside my window,
how dearly i wish to stand in the light,
but i am sick and cannot walk,
so all i can do is dream what it's like

Doctors come into the room,
racing towards my hurried breaths,
i hear them say, she'll die today,
and close my eyes to rest...

snowflakes fall outside my window,
ranindrops and sunshine does too,
but i'm not in bed, for i am dead,
and i can experience the weather like you


To all sick children, who have never been able to live life to full depths....

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  1. Date: 12/4/2009 1:24:00 PM
    I have enjoyed reading your poetry today Faire. Have a wonderful weekend filled with love and compassion for others. Inspiration is waiting for you grab it and write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 8:06:00 PM
    Awwww, How Sad. Why do children have to die?