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Two dollars burn a hole....

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Two dollars burn a hole....

Leather soles and a backlashed whip..
Momentum pulls pavement, 
As cinders scurry the concrete..
Plumes of whistled welding, and the core's heat..
Walls cackle with thrown car horns and hard braking...
Oil pools with it's rainbow slick..
Gunshots and the fleeting feet quick..
Body slides and slumps, reaching for the light..
An old man climbs the dumpster..
Two dollars burn a hole..
Drafty measures, coupled with sharp remarks..
Bitten into bone..
Rolled one for four...
Split wood and bleeding brows....
Two dollars burn a hole.....................TAH

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  1. Date: 7/27/2012 9:04:00 AM

    Very well penned of all the street violence in our towns and cities...regardless of how small or large the city is, there are always those who choose violence over peace. Blessings...Anne

  1. Date: 6/6/2012 8:12:00 AM

    When I click on one of your poems I know it will be exceptional Tobey. Thank you for sharing your words with us. I hope all is well with you and yours sure do miss you. I will stop back again soon. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 8:31:00 PM

    Have to check every now and then to see what you are doing. Having a dry spell? It hits now and then, miss you!

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 8:45:00 AM

    I have truly enjoyed reading your poetry you have posted here at PoetrySoup. You are a very special poet and I wish you the best in your life and with your poetry. Two thumbs up to you Tobey. Love and best wishes always, Carol

  1. Date: 11/6/2011 4:41:00 PM

    Always great for a second read. Where are all the rest of your verses? I thought you had many more than this.

  1. Date: 10/30/2011 4:59:00 PM

    Deep city violence so passionately portrayed. I can only imagine. Just a great effort Tobey.

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 10:20:00 AM

    This a poem that flows through the veins of a city ... a poet that goes whence this poem sits at a banquet of unlimited inspiration. One love

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 11:11:00 AM

    Desperate sounds, sights, even smells. Mucho interesting, Tobey. You are nothing if not prolific...hard to keep up with you, but will comment further on the rest as time goes on. Love, daver

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:52:00 PM

    nicely penned, very much enjoyed today!

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 2:10:00 PM

    Interesting thoughts put to pen. Sounds like a scary city scenerio. Keep the magical pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara