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Haunted Orb

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Haunted Orb

Luna's specter glows
   Gazing at her reflection
In the black night sea







Inspired by Raul's "Reflections" contest

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  1. Date: 2/3/2010 9:47:00 PM

    What a wonderful Haiku! Even the title is outstanding, Carina! I love it! It's going to my favs!! Ptolomeou.

  1. Date: 2/1/2010 5:32:00 AM

    Always top notch writing from you. This is magical as it provides wonderful imagery with a smooth flow and the perfect tone. Excellent writing my dear friend! Michael

  1. Date: 1/20/2010 4:08:00 PM

    ahhhhhhh perfection! To my fav's Light & Love

  1. Date: 1/17/2010 8:19:00 AM

    A beautiful and vivid picture you paint with your words here Donna. My mind's eye could plainly see the moon's reflection in the dark sea. God bless Donna, Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 1/3/2010 1:47:00 PM

    Beautiful imagery here in just a few words ... smile good luck in the contest, Donna !

  1. Date: 12/31/2009 7:37:00 AM

    Hi Donna, wishing you a happy New Year! I am online again after many weeks of being offline. Had no time yet for posting new poems. What a nice Haiku and picture of moon and sea! Love, Gert

  1. Date: 12/17/2009 8:00:00 PM

    I posted a new poem 12/17/09

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 8:44:00 PM

    I posted a new poem.

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 1:49:00 PM

    You have soup mail! Love Light Patricia

  1. Date: 12/13/2009 9:44:00 AM

    Love the title and the poem rocked also, so short and powerful. Enjoy this gem and also have a great sundy. Have a great sunday. :):)

  1. Date: 12/11/2009 2:53:00 AM

    Nice haiku best wishes in the contest. Congratulatioins on being featured on the hot list. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 9:19:00 AM

    Good morning,hope all is well.

  1. Date: 12/8/2009 6:33:00 AM

    Great haiku here, Donna !! Hope you have a wonderful holiday and that 2010 is a great year for your and yours!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2009 10:23:00 PM

    Why do you not recently write ... the night is dark without your inspired light. One love

  1. Date: 12/5/2009 5:56:00 PM

    I posted a christmas poem

  1. Date: 12/4/2009 4:22:00 PM

    Nice use of imagery and personification for a creative view. Keep up the good writing. Karen

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 9:13:00 PM

    How did I miss this beautiful Haiku...Enjoyed..Marty

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 9:05:00 AM

    I love the image of "Luna's specter"...this is such a beautiful haiku! ~Juliane

  1. Date: 12/3/2009 12:48:00 AM

    WoW! Raul's contest inspired some incredible Haiku's. this is one of them. Beautiful, Donna. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 2:34:00 PM

    Wow, this is a wonderful image, Donna! Best wishes for success in the contest with this lovely haiku. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 1:16:00 PM

    And a reflection she gives...Wonderfully written..Very visual...RdP

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 7:59:00 AM

    Nicely put...this one really draws my attention good visual image

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 10:45:00 PM

    a definite winner written with depth and imagination while deeply defining the picture of inspiration wonderfully titled as well,,,Blessings..Cecil,,,and Thank you for holding contests for my inspration as well as others and for the words you leave behind upon mine.

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 7:21:00 PM

    I can imagine this being written in the sand...

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 12:44:00 PM

    Interesting idea for the contest sponsored by Raul. Good luck. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 8:37:00 AM

    Good luck in Raul's contest, Donna dear, but by your entry luck is not necessary as from title to words this haiku has captivated the reader... wonderful visual and the moon is quite haunting sometimes... my entry is Revelation ... every poet has seen a special view of Raul's photo.. fascinating.. blessings ...luv.. thankxxx for being a dear friend... Linda-Marie... "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 8:13:00 AM

    Awesome visual! The image popped right in my head after reading this. It would have to be a full moon, or a half moon could reflect the other half making it whole:) New moon's are just annoying, all style and no substance, and honestly I never thought Robert Pattinson was all that hot...dude's a bit skinny but I guess 13 year old girls go for the effeminate dreamy look nowadays...sorry I kind of drifted off topic:) Thanks for sharing Donna.

  1. Date: 12/1/2009 6:36:00 AM

    The moon is still shining on through war and pestilence. Keep it up. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 11:20:00 PM

    Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Donna.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 9:29:00 PM

    Awesome! Great creation of words and imagery! Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.

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