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  1. Date: 12/4/2009 7:14:00 AM
    Imagery and philosophy combined to tell The poet's version of life's subtle spell ... a provocatively good write.

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 4:55:00 PM
    nice :) Thanks for the visit and comment also. I go know place, and you're there too... hugs love.

  1. Date: 12/2/2009 5:40:00 AM
    kissed ripe?u re magical wt words!

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 2:22:00 PM
    Wonderful Haiku Deborah, could be a winner in Raul's contest. Thank you ever so much for placing me in your contest, i really enjoyed the challenge >> kindest regards >> James

  1. Date: 11/30/2009 8:55:00 AM
    Beautiful Deb .. hope its for Raul's new contest.. in the top winners I would say.. thankxxx for my winning placement in your contest.. it was a unique challenge and got my juices going to get it right ...with all your patient help of course... I am truly honored and appreciate u so much for the time u took to not let me "throw in the towel".. blessings .. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetie" thankxxx for enjoying my poetry...

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 5:50:00 PM
    Interesting approach to the picture in this impressive Haiku. Keep the magical pen flowing. Good luck in the contest. Sara

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 4:47:00 PM
    Your word arrangement is expertly done Deborah..... Keep going.....:JP]

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 4:38:00 PM
    Excellent , Deborah !

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 3:20:00 PM
    this is by far one of the best Haikus ever keep it up

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 2:38:00 PM
    great words. Pam

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 2:25:00 PM
    Interesting use of imagery for a creative view. I like the opening line. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

  1. Date: 11/29/2009 2:19:00 PM
    good luck if you're enetering the contest. its a very good haiku