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Seeing Stars

Seeing stars dance
with purple scars
Dust it with bits of wonder
lightning and thunder
a thin line in between
rain and rainbows
cross through for endless tears 
that can never hear
I love you

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  1. Date: 7/28/2010 2:00:00 PM

    short and sweet with a faint sparkle of poetic genius

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 11:44:00 AM

    Dear Karen: I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your poem. I really liked the line "a thin line between rain and rainbows". This reminds me of a poem that I wrote called Between A Tear and A Smile. Great job!!! yours truly: Sheol

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 10:01:00 AM

    That is right the scars of emotion. Keep the creative flow coming. Sara

  1. Date: 11/24/2009 4:13:00 AM

    Wonderful poetry you present to us today Karen. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 6:15:00 AM

    excellent , Karen. excellent. Did a double take on this one. -Robert

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 4:40:00 AM

    Very well done, Karen!...looking forward reading more....Tim

  1. Date: 11/23/2009 3:32:00 AM

    Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading this morning. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit