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Bright Lights

at dawn's first

 light*******

the radiance
is blinding to
my eye sight
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  1. Date: 9/21/2011 5:06:00 PM

    Good to hear from you, Deneen, Time to get going on the soup again. LOve, daver

  1. Date: 9/18/2010 12:08:00 PM

    boy you got this right the morning sun makes me sneeze for some reason enjoyed this read and write also thankls for your comments on my poems I will be back to give ya more just trying to get back on saddle here in soup keep up the great writing

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 4:04:00 PM

    Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James

  1. Date: 3/21/2010 4:04:00 PM

    Nature gives us so many wonderful sights, breathtaking are many of them >> lovely Haiku >> James

  1. Date: 12/26/2009 10:41:00 AM

    Yes, it is. Very beautiful....Love, Sara

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 11:54:00 PM

    Like it especially th presentationD-nyce.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 11/19/2009 4:50:00 PM

    Nicely done Haiku that should do well. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 7:54:00 PM

    A great Haiku. God Bless Phyl