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thirsty

Lord, I don't want water... 
I want a new beginning a better way for things to be

I am thirsty in soul
I am thirsty spiritually

I can love with my whole heart
body and mind
but will it be recipricated...in this lifetime
I laugh because its not about conquests
that I can do, have done...ain't no thang
for none have I ever really truly sang
though others sing to me... 
all I utter from my lips... with all the drinks I have had... I am still
THIRSTY

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  1. Date: 11/17/2009 5:12:00 PM

    Kathy you may be in luck, take a look at my poem "Two Thousand Twelve" and let me know what you think. The better way, I think is on it's way. I think a lot of people are, as you, ready for a change. Sincerely, Moses

  1. Date: 11/17/2009 4:37:00 PM

    Love the first four lines. Seriously written look to be filled. Keep writing. Sara