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Suicidal(a reason to live)

I am standing on the edge 
please pull me back
I have a lack of interest in life
the thrills are gone
the happiness has dried up
the color red looks like rust
my sign reads to heaven or bust
the color blue is every where I look
and pops like a whore's lip gloss
I have returned all that was given to me
I have no joy or glee
from this life I want to flee
but I say to you hold on one more day
I say to you there is always a rainbow after the rain
I say to you there is a sunrise after midnight
you shall suffer this plight
you live on everyday til the sun burns up
so chin up
here comes tomorrow

If you feel suicidal hold on one more day

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  1. Date: 11/18/2009 10:55:00 AM

    Very well written.

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:31:00 PM

    Very descriptive of one suffering from depression. I hope a topic and not you. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:13:00 PM

    Thank you for reading my poems and the comments you gave.

  1. Date: 11/14/2009 4:12:00 PM

    It's time.I can't hold on even one more minute.I'm working on my final poem.