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rebel

Games before homework,
Going to bed after twelve,
pop before breakfast,
turns to drugs at twenty-one,
sex before marrige,
and acohol at thirteen.
Tonight rebelions unite!

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  1. Date: 1/8/2011 10:47:00 AM

    Very cool :) - Sounds like 90% of people

  1. Date: 11/18/2009 12:14:00 PM

    i lovee this one. it's so truee!

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 10:02:00 PM

    True enjoyed your Tanka...Marty

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 4:16:00 PM

    Hi Bree, welcome to the Soup. As for me I can certainly relate to this poem. I have done two prison terms for Manufacturing Crystal Methaphetamine. At 41 I turned to God while I was in the hole and instantly started writing poems. Something that no one; not even myself, dreamed I would ever do - I had surgery on my knee today so I have go lay down but I wanted to say hello and that I feel very blessed by our meeting, YF4L, mj