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Was That You?

Tangled up in the sheets man that was fun.
 Yeah id stick around my darlin.
But the train's a waitting and so I gotta run. 

Tommy  and Phil  will be at the dinner waitting with ready ear.
Screw the coffee darlin.
I preffer a smoke and a beer.

The waitress sat staring at me as I sat lost
without a clue.
She said thought you had to leave town.
memories get hazy but she reminded me with a swift
kick oh crap darlin was that you.

Sometmes it's not so easy to recall.
Precious memories shared.
In a nightclubs bathroom stall.

Hey it was a perfect moment amougnst many.
Sure I recall your name.
It's Rebecca  Sandy  okay I wouldnt have guessed Kenny.

Sometimes it"s awkward  hitting  on a chick only to
have her reply but I thought we were threw.
Maybe i should lay off the booze.
Cause im really getting tired of asking 
was that you?

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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 11:22:00 AM

    This is a really good poem i Like the rhymes keep writing

  1. Date: 11/11/2009 6:47:00 PM

    I love those Rhymes i am a fan of you :)