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sequence - Footle - All Hallows' Eve

The doomed
entombed

Now rise
death cries

In fear
we hear

Death trills
blood chills......




Inspired by Donna Goldens' Footle Fright contest

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  1. Date: 10/27/2009 11:25:00 PM

    woderful and scary a very indepth piece for Halloween and Congratulations on your win,,and Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 12:59:00 PM

    Great job, Robin!! Congratulations on your 2nd place in Donna's Contest! Ruben

  1. Date: 10/27/2009 7:20:00 AM

    congrats on the second place, great poem!!

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:52:00 PM

    Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your second place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:03:00 PM

    Well done Robin and congrats on your win. Thank you for your comments on mine. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 2:08:00 PM

    You go Gal!!! Big winner!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 6:44:00 AM

    Congratulations, Robin! Love your footle series. A well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 6:32:00 AM

    Great job, Robin! Congratulations!! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:15:00 AM

    Congrats in you win in Donna's footle contest >> James

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Robin. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 3:34:00 AM

    Congrats on your EXCELLENT footle win, Robin

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 12:19:00 AM

    A Royal footle success , QR and well done ....

  1. Date: 10/25/2009 10:22:00 PM

    Wonderful footle, Robin! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest! Hugs, Donna

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 10:34:00 PM

    I love these footles! You're so talented, Robin! Good luck in Donna's Contest! Ruben.

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 10:06:00 PM

    a powerful sequence of words and thoughts that set forth the Halloween theme so very well,,,,Thank you for reading and commenting upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 9:07:00 AM

    the only time of year to laugh at monsters and horror. i love it. jhl

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:03:00 PM

    Awsome footle Robin, Wickedly witty, my Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 5:34:00 PM

    yike scary wow! Light & Love

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 2:44:00 PM

    Awesome Footle Robin, if this don't get into the winners enclosure > i should be turned into a pumpkin for my prediction not being proven to be true >> James

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 1:38:00 PM

    great job, nicely penned.

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 12:28:00 PM

    We must bow to the footle Mistress! This is quite a wicked write! Oops, I think I hear something groaning at the door. Could it be? Oh, no! Robin was right! Love you, dear. Carolyn

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 12:21:00 PM

    Excellent sequence QR, this was a fun contest...Raul

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 12:01:00 PM

    Good luck in the contest. Nicely done. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 9:52:00 AM

    Great entry to the contest Robin.. a spooky tale told in few words! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 8:52:00 AM

    Yikes! Fitting for Halloween. I like the strong ending. Good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 7:36:00 AM

    These are good...good luck in the contest...Marty