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Summer Seduction

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Summer Seduction

Jasmine wafts 


     From sun-kissed shoulders


            Entrancing the senses

      
                Irrevocably









For Brian's Contest, "Imagine". The painting which inspired me was "Summer Evening".

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  1. Date: 2/28/2011 11:43:00 PM
    makes me want to see the painting :) very picturesque language

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 10:04:00 PM
    Donna~ I wonderful picture you painted with your mind I love this! Love Laura :)

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 7:22:00 PM
    that's what this poem does. It entrances the senses! simple and quite effective. Congrats. Robert

  1. Date: 11/13/2009 2:37:00 PM
    Wonderful expressions from your talented pen... just had to comment again and thankxxx for your blog comments... I like and agree with all u suggested... your input is greatly appreciated... luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 5:15:00 PM
    nicely penned, sun kissed shoulders, nice ideas.

  1. Date: 10/26/2009 4:34:00 PM
    beautifully written .. summer is a seductive time of the year and u have captured it perfectly ... thankxxx for your comments on my halloween contribution... I enjoy PS and all the wonderful poets I have the pleasure to communicate with and share our verses..... Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 10/24/2009 4:57:00 AM
    Congratulations, Donna, on placing in Brian’s Imagine contest. Your creativity shines. Smiles, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 1:36:00 PM
    Interesting use of multi-sense imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Keep up the good writing. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 12:52:00 PM
    This is nice! I really like this. I like that you saw romance in this and not necessarily break-up. Congratulations with this beautiful piece!

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 7:33:00 AM
    Just beautiful, Donna. So much unsaid in just a few lines. And thanks for your comments on my poems.

  1. Date: 10/19/2009 5:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well derserved WIN in Brians contest Donna, with this beautiful piece! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 9:00:00 AM
    I love this interpretation of the painting. Well done, and congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 6:20:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Donna. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/18/2009 1:10:00 AM
    Congrats on your success in my contest Donna.Rgds Brian.My latest contest'Poet Laureate' is now open. Than you for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 10/17/2009 2:08:00 PM
    Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 9:45:00 PM
    Beautiful atmosphere in this free verse, Donna. Thank you so much for your comment on my blog. Yes, I am very proud of my son :) Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 4:17:00 PM
    Donna This is so dreamy. Outstanding, Good luck in Brian's contest! Love Light Truth Patty

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 9:54:00 AM
    This is such a beautiful rendition of this haunting painting, Donna! I love the title and your layout! Good luck in Brians' contest! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 1:35:00 PM
    Wow, a true Golden Delicious >> beautiful poem Donna >> James

  1. Date: 10/15/2009 12:26:00 PM
    Sensual. Excellent work.

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