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Unknown Knowledge

Oh magical, vast universe
Transmit that uncommon wisdom
Into my vital mind
Inject that juicy truth 
Into my prowling soul
For I desire to know the real

Oh wondrous, never ending life 
Reveal your well-planned method
Unveil the hypothesis of eternity
Expose the deception from the legit
For I crave to know the actual

Oh intelligent, orderly design
Disclose the nature of creation
Into my probing existence  
Confess your penetrating vision 
Into my suspicious awareness
For I itch to know the undiscovered  

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  1. Date: 10/10/2009 8:46:00 AM

    Excellent piece, Jerrica! Welcome to PoetrySoup! Beautifully inspired sentiment and so well written! Thank you for your kind words and I look forward to sharing in the future! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 7:07:00 PM

    Welcome to PoetrySoup... Keep writing

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 5:07:00 PM

    There is a lot of depth for the reader to ponder about in this poem. Creative perspective. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 9:18:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jerrica. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol