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Sounds

Fake locations
fake bread you brake daily
tryin
 to escape your true path of hatred
 
I like you better when you are only you
naked with with your blunt words
don't hide behind the white sheets in Georgia
I will find you and place storms there.

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  1. Date: 10/4/2009 5:15:00 AM

    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/4/2009 4:59:00 AM

    This is an interesting write here. I could go several different ways here. Keep writing. Sara