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Happiness

                                 Happiness.

                     Happiness for sale ?
                     Only for a while
                     Afterwords pale !.

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  1. Date: 10/1/2009 4:38:00 PM

    fun senryu! Chacko!...love the pause and space before ? & ! ....gives a feeling of hesitation, which adds depth to your fine poem!!! jimbo