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Discordance

My heart is like discordant music,
From hues of jade, to tingling electricity,
Everytime I steal a glance at her

She is silent staring down in her usual 
gentle way, perhaps contemplating her 
next read

A din now plays in my head, the din of 
the voices of friends,
Telling me how much she cares

Yet now she is as quiet as a timid child, 
staring down in serenity, face devoid of 
expression

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  1. Date: 10/15/2009 6:38:00 AM

    Nicely done, Erastus. I like the first stanza...priceless! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 11:35:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your heartfelt poetry Erastus. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/28/2009 6:31:00 AM

    Pretty good stanza.

  1. Date: 9/27/2009 11:10:00 PM

    Hey bro. She is like a blank paper. Go and paint those beautiful expressions in her heart so it can reflect on her face and deeds. Break the ice 'cause she's waiting. Nice articulation.