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As I Look At The Sky

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As I Look At The Sky


(Hourglass poem) 


I look at the sky and see clouds 
Blush and cover sun as they flood 
And light grows small as they go by 
I watch them as they cross the sky 

I see clouds change into weird shapes 
Sometimes the sky is a blue grape 
But there are times when it turns gray 
And that's when the sun fades away 

Looking at the sky is quite nice 
I'd love to watch it more than twice 
As they glow in the night so bright 
And count stars in the sky at night 

And count stars in the sky at night 
As they glow in the night so bright 
I'd love to watch it more than twice 
Looking at the sky is quite nice 

And that's when the sun fades away 
But there are times when it turns gray 
Sometimes the sky is a blue grape 
I see clouds change into weird shapes 

I watch them as they cross the sky 
And light grows small as they go by 
Blush and cover sun as they flood 
I look at the sky and see clouds! 


:-) 



Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2009 


August 25,2009 


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  1. Date: 11/19/2009 12:50:00 AM
    Excellent Dorian.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 3:58:00 AM
    Clouds and starry skies giv us always new impressions. I still keep watching clouds as they transform. A well written poem, Dorian. And thans for commentig my Haiku Autumn...Gert

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 6:15:00 PM
    An intriguing poem Dorian, I've done some sky gazing in my younger days myself. Sincerely Moses