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She's Already Here

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She's Already Here

Alone He'll Bask in The Essence of Brief Tranquility,
Forgetting the Usually Governing Turbulence.

Alcohol Slips So Sweetly into The System, That
Uncontrollable Tears Dampen the Cheeks.

               - Why is it Sadness is so aroused -
                           - By Tranquility -

He's Calm By Nature, But The Viciousness of The
World and its People Maximizes his Barbs.

He Saw So Much of Himself in His Enemies, and
It Broke Him. 

              -A Simple Clash of Mentality Congruency -
       - With a Complete Division of Physical Embodiment -

He Sat Calm, in an Ocean of Thought, Mediating His
Thoughts Processes. She Encompasses all Aspects.

Every Second That Passed Was Built of Her, He Could
Taste Her Lips on His. He Closed His Eyes, and Smiled.

               - Her Kisses, Salted From Their Travel -
                          - Over Many Oceans -

He Played Her Song, and The Strings Vibrated 
Louder Than His Thoughts Ever Would.

He Smiled and
Licked His Lips.

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  1. Date: 9/21/2009 9:12:00 AM

    Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Conor. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 4:32:00 AM

    I love you and I'm going to miss you like crazy. I'm sorry I couldn't get back on. =[ See you Friday, kay punkin? <00 <3 I'll be thinking about you the entire time.

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 3:45:00 PM

    Nicely done couplet. Keep writing. I especially liked the third couplet. Sara

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 2:24:00 PM

    Quite a powerful write, Conor. Love the image of "Her kisses, salted from their travel over many oceans." He seems bound to her in both spirit and emotion. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 11:40:00 AM

    This is beautiful... I love every word but especially the emotion in "She Encompasses all Aspects. Every Second That Passed Was Built of Her, He Could Taste Her Lips on His. He Closed His Eyes, and Smiled." This made me tear up and my eyes burn -and I feel the exact same way. I love you, Blaze.

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 11:39:00 AM

    The second and third stanza are masterful, along with this line...He Sat Calm, in an Ocean of Thought" Nice work...Raul