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Sailing the Seas In A Pecan Tree

The wind billows out from the seat of his britches
With determined eyes, skinned knuckles and knees
He climbs up the rails nailed from old cedar pieces
To the uppermost yoke of the old pecan tree

He is Captain on board, in pretend salty breezes
From his perch in the bird's nest, the world in his view
A small town boy, who has never seen oceans
In the happiest place, where a boy's dreams come true

While the cornstalks stand duty, wavy pumpkin vine waters
He breaks off a branch and a sword fight ensues..
He says "Tally Ho...Land Ahoy!!" to his crew
Dogs are barking below, and he shouts out a warning
There are sharks all around, so his shipmates must heed

He is Master Commander, the ruler of nations
He dreams of adventure from his loft in the tree
As he watches the clouds sail across a blue sea
Till his mother calls him in, for his suppertime leave
          
                              ~
               Well, little boys grow, and a childhood will fade
               The leaf of the pecan, no longer holds shade 
               Now a stump of the tree, is all that is left
               Yet the memory still thrives, so deep in his breast

               When the weight of the world comes tumbling down
               He visits this place with the stump in the ground
               The rings wrap around him, and takes him aboard
               To the place of his childhood, a place he adored
               
               Tonight he will sleep in a bed of contentment
               In his bunk he will dream of his loft in the tree
               Tomorrow he'll climb up the steps to his vessel
               Tomorrow he'll be where the eagles fly free....

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Written for my grandson......
who I am proud to say has always loved adventure...
and is now serving duty with the Navy on the U.S.S. Truxtun (Destroyer)


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  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:52:00 AM

    Glad to see this poem is standing the test of time. Is your son still sailing the seas with the US Navy? Always loving your work.....RAY

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 10:27:00 AM

    Many congrats to you on your grand win. Excellent! AO

  1. Date: 5/19/2013 6:43:00 AM

    My big heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved super win and marvelous write my dear friend Carrie! Cheers! Thank you so much for sharing and your congratulatory comments as well. Happy weekend! love lots, Leonora

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 5:19:00 AM

    Very inspiring you must be very pround. I enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on your top notch win.

  1. Date: 5/18/2013 12:55:00 AM

    Carrie having read all the comments, all I can do is echo them. Really fabriocious haha tried to think up a word to show you the poem is off the planet....Seren

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 8:11:00 PM

    very nice write. i like the rhyme and context. i also was in the navy - on a destroyer. i was a torpedoman. home port was mayport, florida. i wish him well and safety. thanks for sharing your poem. congrats. randy

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:48:00 PM

    So vivid Carrie,,outstanding! And congratulations to the grandson of which I know you are so proud! Congratulations on the win..

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 6:42:00 PM

    Carrie, You're the Secretariat of Poetry! Congratulations to you for all your wins....

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:59:00 PM

    Well, what can I say that tops the other comments? Just glad that you put this one in the contest so I had a chance to read it, I guess. I spent many hours in the fine native pecan trees that grow so big in Texas hill country. It's a fav, for sure!

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:45:00 PM

    beautiful...congrats on your win

  1. Date: 5/17/2013 5:40:00 PM

    Hello Miss Carrie, Congratulations!!! I was very moved by the poem you entered in my latest contest. Thank you very much for the. *PS... A nice black & white picture of the USS Truxtun (DD-229) from the United States Navy during World War II hangs nicely in my fathers living room. the best class of destroyer in my book, up to this very day one must say.

  1. Date: 4/22/2011 5:40:00 PM

    I remember this one quite well, Carrie-- enjoyed reading it as much as I did before! super congrats on your win with this :D hugs to you :D

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 4:21:00 PM

    Way to go Carrie, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 3:25:00 PM

    Excellent rhyme you created here, my dear Carrie! Congratulations on your well deserved first place. Thank you for your warm and nice comment. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 12:54:00 PM

    Congratulations on the first place win in the contest, Carrie

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 11:22:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in the contest Carrie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 8:37:00 AM

    WHAT CAN I SAY????? The word MASTERPIECE, does not do it justice, hope you have entered this in Constance's tree contest as well. To my fav's, Carrie, Love, Lainike

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 8:31:00 AM

    Wow Carrie, you rule! I bow down to you, absolutely brilliant and beautiful. CONGRATS! And thanks for letting me know! Hugs, shar xoxo

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 8:09:00 AM

    Oh, this is such a touching poem. Very cool how you split it into two parts of past and present like that. Very uplifting too. Carrie, congratulations on your 1st place victory!

  1. Date: 4/21/2011 7:16:00 AM

    This read as so real and fantastic. Enchanting Carrie. Many warm congrats for this terrific write

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 10:13:00 PM

    What a very endearing write on childhood and its adventures, Carrie-- totally made me smile and I just loved how this flowed so well :) wonderful though that he can still dream and relive those childhood gems-- Congrats on your win, :) - hugs nikko :)

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 10:10:00 PM

    Carrie...many congrats on big win in the contest... Luv/Best wishes.... hitendra Mehta

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 9:40:00 PM

    AWESOME, Carrie. I am loving every single tree poem as I go down the list tonight! COngratulations! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 7:49:00 PM

    Congrats Carrie on your big win in Matt's contest falling in luv with a tree stump.. great words.. great win.. enjoy with luv..

  1. Date: 11/17/2010 4:29:00 PM

    wow I like yours better than mine! Great children's story! Makes me want to draw? Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/27/2010 1:15:00 AM

    Thank you for supporting my contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 11/21/2009 10:42:00 AM

    catured the imagination of children beautifully, Francine

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 4:27:00 PM

    This is wonderful Carrie. I'm so glad I found it. I hope there are still boys who use their imagination in such a manner without having to have video game action. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 12:32:00 PM

    Wonderfully imaginative, great imagery! Such a fun poem! Thank you also for your comments, well wishes and support. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 12:06:00 PM

    This is gangster as Abe says u wrote a poem for my FAVE art teach of all time.....MR.LOPEZ!!!!!!!!! this is cool....~$avannah~

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