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Tidal waves with no threat


traveling through air 

these tidal waves show no threat 

seen nor to be heard 


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i can't bother what ppl say about me .. i am me 
not gone change .. so these words willl just go by my ears .. as the air moves it with it

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  1. Date: 9/21/2009 3:36:00 AM

    Interesting thoughts put to pen. Thanks for your comments on my work. My poem about the Weeping Willow was about more than what it seemed you are right on. Keep writing. Sara---Like the concept that I received from this one but it never hurts to listen to others say and then make a choice as to whether to use the advice they give.

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 4:35:00 PM

    Nice message, I concur with this. Nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 10:15:00 AM

    I'm with you...yes, I can relate to your statement! I like it, I really do. Good job, my friend. Ruben.