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Mother Nature ?

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Mother Nature ?

Mother' has no nature,
T’s  mind’s illusion,
Brings to that conclusion,

T’was God' who made the worlds,
And saves from perils,

Also the vast expanse,
T’was not by chance,

By great explosion'
Was God’s exposing,
His inner self, to some degree,
That all could see,
What nature' Love be,
The Tower' of power,

The great bang'
Scientist claim,
Brought our world to fame,

Power of God’s great quality,
Brought forth this great quantity,
Love is the nature of it all,
Because of God’s call,
It doth not fall,
By love’s intention,
God’s invention,
Of spinning intention,

Black holes'
Are only God’s goals,
They only remold,
When forms grow old,
And finish their intention,
Of love’s invention,

Recycling the universe,
Getting ready, for re-disperse,
Re-forming new forms,
No cause to be alarm,

Great consciousness' the- God-of bliss,
Keeps up--with-all-of -this,
Some call, great cosmic mind,
Doth keep aligned,
The worlds are fine,

The great cosmic mind’s,
Nature love, is fine,
Keeping all aligned,
And purely refined,
Mother is in line,
Till end of time,

Love's gold' Life cycled,
Doth never grow old,
Re-cycle, Re-mold' 
Love' God's Gold!!


9-18-09 johnmosesfreeman@yahoo.com

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  1. Date: 2/11/2010 6:48:00 AM
    Great write and beautiful expressions of your faith in God and seeing Him in every thing and in every form. How close it is with the Hindu philosophy which also sees Him in every thing and in every form constant or changing any where in universe. Beautiful Poem with great thoughts. Thanks and Many thanks for your precious comments. Best wishes and love.. Ravindra....JF

  1. Date: 12/30/2009 4:41:00 PM
    A wonderfully poignant message you have penned here Moses....Filled with faith and love of Our Lord. Very inspirational and uplifting! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works! Many thanks too for your always wonderfully kind comments and words of encouragement! All is truly appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

  1. Date: 11/9/2009 4:14:00 AM
    Thanks Moses, for food for part of my morning meditation. Along with poems by St Therese of Lisieux. Also Thank you for your encouraging comments !

  1. Date: 11/7/2009 9:50:00 AM
    Great poem! we all need reMINDing, I love Robert Celentano's comment! Also thank you for your wit! love Simone

  1. Date: 10/29/2009 5:05:00 PM
    Moses, I love this poem so much. It makes me wish I had written it. Nice approach to Creation vs Big Bang. Truly inspiring! Sincerely, Richard

  1. Date: 10/23/2009 6:05:00 AM
    All I can say about this write is WOW ... superb and intense ... dramatic description.. and most of all .. its TRUE!! So nice to find a poet who knows that God is everything and more... that is how we poets create poems for all to enjoy.. I have some poems posted that are spiritual in nature ..if u want to check them out.. keep up the fantastic verses.. Linda-Marie

  1. Date: 10/22/2009 6:53:00 AM
    Tis all still a mystery to me. The only thing I am certain of is: it is a much greater power than I who created it all. A greater power that I am a part of - that I call God. Thank you for sharing this very thought evoking piece. Love, Lainie

  1. Date: 10/12/2009 2:03:00 PM
    Could have been a big bang that created the universe with all its planets, moons and stars, but life evolved in very slow, silently from the smallest elements to the largest bodies through their growth and multiplication and indeed all life force originate in the Creator. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem, "September's Gone". God bless. Best wishes, Caroline.

  1. Date: 10/8/2009 5:55:00 PM
    This is such a wonderful rhyme, Moses! Thought provoking piece filled with the conviction of your beautiful faith in God, our bevevolent Creator! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 2:27:00 PM
    We can refer to "Mother Nature," "the cosmic mind" or "The universal consciousness," but for those of us who are Christian, we see all of it as God's handiwork. I really admire the depth of your faith and the way you are able to convey your thoughts so brilliantly in rhyme. I agree with the concepts you have expressed, Moses. Great poem! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 6:46:00 PM
    a nice write. Thank you for your wonderful input on my poems. Your an amazing poet and keep up the good work. Autumn Page

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 4:38:00 PM
    I agree completely, nicely written!

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 9:57:00 AM
    Beautifully written! Thank for your recent comments on the poem Gentle Dove, the poem is, as you mentioned, dedicated to my husband. ~Trudy~

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 5:24:00 PM
    Nicely done on an interesting subject. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 1:04:00 PM
    Fantastic... Future Fortold For Us All... Moses... This Poem Will Never Die... You Know Why?... Because It Is Truth... You've Made Your FATHER Proud, Boy ! (Smile) Great Flow, (Oh... and Mother Nature - that's Just Eve, trying to take Credit :) :) LOL Your Country Gal, Poet-Pal MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 11:30:00 AM
    Well, Moses, this is a brilliant write...one with which I COMPLETELY agree! It is going directly into my favorites! Very, very well done! Donna

  1. Date: 9/19/2009 12:46:00 AM
    I too loked especially that inal verse John.More power to your pen.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 10:06:00 PM
    i feel you man. i see it clearly. God bless my brother Moses. Diogenes

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 8:17:00 PM
    I agree with you, God is our evolution..good poem....Karla

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 7:26:00 PM
    beautiful flowing poem! Moses!...jim

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