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Earthquake

.                      mother natures plates 
                                         soil growling with hunger pains
                                                digesting earth crumbs

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  1. Date: 9/23/2009 2:48:00 PM

    Hey... Here's One... Who Broke The Tectonic plates ? Answer: It was The San Andreas Fault (Yeah, I'm Kooky - but Some have already guessed that... Great Write Abe... MoonBee

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 7:31:00 AM

    Oooh, very nice, Abe. This haiku does much more than just paint a picture. It creates wonder and fear of Mother Nature's power. Awesome! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 11:30:00 PM

    Wow! and Wow! Impressive image and excellent word use. I'm with the King: you're on a roll...thinking about overthrowing? : ) Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 5:49:00 PM

    Living in California....we can relate to the hungry earth....it seems to like the West Coastal area..... "knock on wood" we aren't near any major fault line...however we have felt a few shakes over the years! (ps... thank you for your kind comments today. Irene was a dear neighbor.)

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 4:51:00 PM

    soil growling with hunger..explosion erupts--nice Haiku Abe--Charma

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM

    Soil growing with hunger pains...wicked line.

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 1:13:00 PM

    Soup mail.

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 11:38:00 AM

    Abe, this is excellent! I will read more of your work! Thank you!

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 10:23:00 AM

    You're on a roll with great haiku's, nice work as usual...Raul

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 10:00:00 AM

    Clever Haiku Abe, another Gem>>James