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Haiku - Mirror Reflection

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Haiku - Mirror Reflection

A leaf touches down
Rippling the flames of autumn
Burning on the lake


Awarded:  Second Place
Rick Parise 
Contest: One Haiku  

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  1. Date: 7/1/2011 11:03:00 AM

    congrats on the win!!

  1. Date: 6/28/2011 5:38:00 PM

    congrats on your big win in the contest, this paints a blazing image of autumn, very good haiku...

  1. Date: 6/27/2011 10:50:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in ^RICK's "One Haiku" contest Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 11:17:00 AM

    Magnificent, Lainie. Congrats on your big win! Health issues are preventing me from spending much time online. Perhaps after the physical therapy I will be able to read and comment more. Thanks for reading my entry. I actually did see an "outcast" bird on the beach and somehow related to its feelings. Love and blessings, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 12:34:00 AM

    Awesome imagery!!! Congrats Elaine on your win.. a beautiful picture you painted with this. Love, gautami

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 5:25:00 PM

    Creative work..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:41:00 PM

    Very striking imagery you have here, Lainie-- really enjoyed how you depicted autumn here :) Super congrats on your wonderful win :D and thank you as well for your encouraging comments in mine :D

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:12:00 PM

    last line was a spark.. congrats on you high win, elaine! :) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 10:00:00 PM

    Lovely, vivid haiku....even though I don't want to think about autumn yet hehe. Seriously, wonderfully done, Elaine. Congratulations on your win~!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 8:58:00 PM

    ooooh, how descriptive of the fall, Elaine. Excellent winner!!

  1. Date: 6/24/2011 6:36:00 PM

    Congrats Laine on a beautiful win in the contest with this beautiful picture painted in words my friend.. enjoy.. luv..

  1. Date: 10/1/2009 12:06:00 AM

    Into my favourites as well Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 7:42:00 AM

    Gorgeous haiku! Thanks sweet Lainie for your thoughtful congrats on my feature. Hugs, shar xoxo

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 8:38:00 AM

    Thank you for your welcome comments today Elaine.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 9/20/2009 2:43:00 PM

    A beautiful "reflection" of Autumn, Lainie. Lovely haiku! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 9/18/2009 12:08:00 AM

    Like the colourful contrasts and play on words in L2/3 Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and encouragment to my poetry

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 2:28:00 PM

    Very nice image, Elaine. Smiling, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 9/17/2009 10:37:00 AM

    hmm, Autumn is at it again... thanks for sharing this, it's awesome

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 9:49:00 AM

    And it goes to my favs.!!

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 9:48:00 AM

    WoW! this is so beautiful, Elaine!! Wonderful picture! I love it! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 5:31:00 AM

    Poised, very well penned. Thx for commenting. All the best.

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 2:52:00 AM

    A wonderful Haiku Elaine..keep up the great work.. Farah

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 1:18:00 AM

    Beautifully written Haiku. I can see the scene. Keep writing. Sara. P.S. Thanks for the comments on my poem about dimwit poet contest. A man on here called john loving iii wrote a poem about me and wanted to know my middle name that is what that is about.

  1. Date: 9/16/2009 12:08:00 AM

    Thanks for your welcome comments today Elaine.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 7:10:00 AM

    You have ceated such beautiful, vivid images in this wonderful Haiku, Lainie! I can see it and it is a lovely sight to see! Love, Robin

  1. Date: 9/15/2009 12:09:00 AM

    Love the imagery of L2 Elaine.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 3:29:00 PM

    a beautiful picture!

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 10:26:00 AM

    What a beautiful view. Lovely Haiku Lainie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/14/2009 8:12:00 AM

    Oh, I hate to see those leaves fluttering down though they may be beautiful. Beautiful haiku. Love, daver