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fire

i cant help but stare
as it dances
the warmth hitting my face
it is perfect
it is perfection

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  1. Date: 9/11/2009 11:42:00 AM

    Beautiful poem... this is the first meditation lesson.

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 7:53:00 AM

    I think it is a man thing. It is nice to have a warm open fire on a cold winter's day. Keep writing. Like the style of this one. Sara

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 7:05:00 AM

    Watching a fire, can be memerizing. We had a campfire recently while in the mountains, and we can sit and stare and watch it for hours...there is just something about it....