Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


See and share Beautiful Nature Photos and amazing photos of interesting places



Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

A Remorseful Queen

Yoni Dvorkis Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled A Remorseful Queen which was written by poet Yoni Dvorkis. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Yoni Dvorkis

Best Yoni Dvorkis Poems

+ Fav Poet

A Remorseful Queen

Blessed is the lamb led to the slaughter
      -Eager smiles, cold visage
      -I give truth to your mirage
      -You have a golden ticket
      -You have a chance to make your way
      -A windowless room, I leave you there to pray
Worker ant is disposable
      -The doors are fastened shut 
      -A lock you'll never cut
      -The queen reeks of profit margins
      -The triangle is ablaze
      -Your endless numbered days
Surrender your huddled masses yearning to breathe free
      -Give me your tired
      -Perishable by fire
      -Illiterates can’t read the fine print   
      -Give me your poor
      -too dead to keep score

And I will pretend
The queen who is my friend
Had no idea why the front doors were locked
And the room had no windows

And I will defend
To uncertain ends
There but for the grace of God goes Me
In empathy for the worker, and the queen

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 11/3/2009 9:15:00 AM
    i really do love this...all of your work....all of your 'soul'...its a beautiful masterpiece.

  1. Date: 9/21/2009 4:18:00 PM
    YIKE powerful I was not sure who to root for and I guess neither are you? I like poems which give me pause...this did! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/11/2009 10:49:00 AM
    Beautifully Written Yoni I Think This Is Quite Lovely

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 4:44:00 PM
    What a beautiful day and what splendid poetry I am reading. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors Yoni. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 12:05:00 PM
    Very good thoughts put to pen in this one. Sara

  1. Date: 9/6/2009 11:19:00 AM
    I can read the fine print Yoni,,,lot to think and ponder...defending your queen,loyalty for friends till the end.....pretending you had no idea why the doors were locked yet you knew...defending to uncertain ends..,i see love loyalty respect and friendship in this poem...its simply beautiful--charma

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 7:54:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Yoni, Indeed the lamb is blessed lead to slaughter. But faith reveals the true face. Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 5:49:00 PM
    much to ponder here! Yoni! good work! and thanks for your comments!...jim

  1. Date: 9/5/2009 5:15:00 PM
    Beautifully penned Yoni..Raul