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Pondering

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Below is the poem entitled Pondering which was written by poet Cesar Cantu. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Multi-faced Pong

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  1. Date: 11/5/2009 11:31:00 AM
    Glad I ran across this creative poem again. Worth more than one read. The imagery is so creative and different. Good job!! Karen

  1. Date: 10/16/2009 8:43:00 PM
    Very good poem. Interesting and poised. Would you pls comment my poem-CauxEvolution... thankfully.

  1. Date: 9/24/2009 9:34:00 PM
    yes, me too ;) pondering..especially line two! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 7:42:00 PM
    Pong like the old school 70s video game? that would be something else. But then this poem does feel like it comes from a different dimension or something weird like that, where stones are made of straws for example:)I can only imagine what other stuff you ponder.

  1. Date: 9/3/2009 12:31:00 PM
    Nice Haiku Cesar, and thank you for very nice comments on my featured poem also.

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 4:29:00 PM
    Great write, Cesar, well done! And thanks for your comment. It closes the lines between Haiku and Senryu. Gert

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 12:10:00 PM
    I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Cesar.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 11:10:00 AM
    Interesting piece Cesar, nice work...Raul

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 9:38:00 AM
    This one blows my mind!!! It tastes like senryu! "Multi-faced Pong"...excellent line....I'm with you, indeed, it stinks!! Good one, Cesar! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/2/2009 8:30:00 AM
    Interesting imagery and nice use of alliteration all packed in three lines for the reader to enjoy. Wonderful second line makes this poem work. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comments. Karen