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little boat

On my little boat, bobbing in the sea. The wind has changed direction and forced me to my 
knees.
The boat, it rocked so violently I was shaken to the core.
My heart seemed frozen as I waited for more.


The air became less troubled as it swept over me, kissing a reminder.
 I may wander bobbing in the sea.
If I get in trouble who will rescue me.

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  1. Date: 8/30/2009 5:16:00 AM

    Delightful little read Jackie>>James

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 7:43:00 AM

    good writing, keep it up and welcome to the soup.

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 12:56:00 PM

    I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Jackie. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol