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Perfection

A loving thought
slips outside
a perfect vision
it cannot hide

Those piercing eyes,
your happy smile
a perfect vision
to dream a while

A dream of you
and all I see
a perfect vision
of love eternity

Your silent dignity
its inner light
a perfect vision
illuminates my sight

A burning hope
please hear it true
a perfect vision
that’s meant for you

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  1. Date: 9/15/2009 2:20:00 PM

    i LIKE YOUR POETRY, WELL WRITTEN

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 5:18:00 AM

    Nicely writtten thoughts put to pen I especially like lines one and two. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/29/2009 3:47:00 AM

    Beautiful rhyme Gareth, it flowed superbly>>James

  1. Date: 8/28/2009 11:46:00 AM

    I enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Gareth. Thank you for sharing.Thank you for your kind comments. Welcome home. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/27/2009 1:41:00 PM

    I really like the flow of the poem, good job