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CONCRETE JUNGLE

Concrete jungle, rats and cats
Illuminated cats eyes traps draw us in
Grin when you fall no applause when you win
Jungle Life with jungle things
Food is scarce though greed is breeding
No Lion in sight, Tigers died from the fight
Eyes appear dim darkness steering you in
Want is need, need not want
No one cares for believing
Jungle days Jungle sunset
Watch where one places there feet for some step
too far and the jungle is no more
This jungle has but a one way door
For once was free and all so clear
In the jungle now nothing appears
But concrete jungle, rats and cats
A song without substance no beat no clap
For once was free and all so clear
The inhabitants of the jungle made the jungle disappear

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  1. Date: 5/1/2010 4:06:00 PM

    niice!..i read through most of your posted poems which i enjoyed and you've got a serious talent for sure!..a very passionate view on love no doubt!..thanks for checkin out some of my writing, im glad you did cause it introduced me to yours!

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 7:58:00 AM

    Like the last line. Keep writing. Sara