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TREATISE...

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TREATISE...

hellow fellow travelers,
i come to you from a far place in a small boat that i carved out of a tree from my fathers 
land that he planted before i was born-
so i am here
and with me is a bag of pearls
hard won from the depths of the sea --these i have counted and polished and they are mine
but to those who can recieve them i offer them freely. i have given many only to see them 
trampled by the proud and arragent. i am humble thowas a prince in my land.so know this i 
will trample the arragent and proud yet share my bread with those who are humble 
and they will call me friend as i will call them
so i invite you all-- let us be friends
o

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  1. Date: 9/10/2009 11:59:00 AM
    Orphani, "Let us be friend"!! Great write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 10:48:00 AM
    Dear Orphani.....oooooo hello friend you know me from another planet as Seren I loved your first poem ;) LOL I am glad to know I have one friend here .. congrates on your wonderful poetry being featured this week my name here is Jayne Eggins :) ... Love Jayne x x

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 7:35:00 AM
    This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 6:59:00 PM
    Orphani - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – God Bless, mj

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 2:24:00 PM
    Orphani, congrats on being featured this week...Raul

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 3:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 7:00:00 AM
    Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/7/2009 5:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. It is always delightful to read sensitive poetry with true feeling like this. Keep those words flowing. Big Smile, Dane Ann

  1. Date: 8/20/2009 9:47:00 PM
    your poem is very meaningful and i like this beautiful creation a lot.well done.keep writing.thanks for your precious comment on my poem.let us be friends...............love,renu

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 7:01:00 AM
    Nice poem, welcome to the soup!

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 6:28:00 AM
    What a beautiful heartfelt poem Orphani. I can see you are going to be quite an asset to out PoetrySoup family. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 5:19:00 AM
    Love the deep meaning of this elegant piece. Keep writing. Sara