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Yoni Dvorkis
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Contact with the skin It hurts but in a good way Now I feel alive.
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/3/2009 4:59:00 PM
shiver..oh my you're on a bummer bent honey...suicide/cutting..oh my I think youre close enough to me for me to come get ya! Goodness! Remember Chuck Norris? Or the Terminator's line? Well, I can be just as fiesty! Stop this! Think good stuff! Candy canes, kittens, flannel sheets, silk underwear LOL..you get the idea! Love's Ya
Jay Loveless
Date: 11/3/2009 9:02:00 AM
i...i never knew you did.....Yoni, this...this hits me hard, and brings the sting of tears to my eyes, from me to you, with this distance apart, i kiss your scars, like i wish, someone had done for me....ill pray to my goddess with your name on my lips....to bring you....the missing pieces that you need.forever a bleeding sister, xo Raiin
Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/28/2009 9:28:00 AM
So many interpretations can be made on this provocative poem, Yoni. For me, I see someone who finds it painful to initiate physical contact with another, but once they do, the fear and pain are gone and they are rewarded by joy. Very compelling write! I'm still in Jersey, but had to stop by and check out your write. Love you! Carolyn
James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/20/2009 8:31:00 PM
I reach out with emotion to help heal, very moving, Yoni...jmg
john loving iii
Date: 8/18/2009 2:22:00 PM
different strokes for different folks. ( Men get punished. Dogs get put down.) jhl
Date: 8/15/2009 5:49:00 PM
So sad. As a nurse I've worked with people have to find pain in order to find relief of a deeper pain. Such a tragic life. Karen
Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 8/15/2009 9:52:00 AM
I missed some of the excellent poetry written and posted here yesterday Yoni. I am enjoying reading them this morning. Thank you for sharing yours. Love, Carol
Carrie Richards
Date: 8/15/2009 7:55:00 AM
Yes...this is a sad way many young people deal with pain...I hope it is something you can overcome if this is about yourself. Best wishes...
Sara Kendrick
Date: 8/15/2009 7:12:00 AM
Sad but true. It would be hard to live with that much anxiety plaguing one eveyday. Keep writing. Sara
Charmaine Chircop
Date: 8/15/2009 4:20:00 AM
excellent Yoni--charma
Ruben O.
Date: 8/15/2009 12:26:00 AM
This one blows my mind! Excellent senryu, Yoni. Awesome. Ruben.
brian anderson
Date: 8/14/2009 11:00:00 PM
wow. yoni, this is something i had to deal with with my little brother. man.... i'm trying not to cry.... you know how i feel about you and your amazing work. i won't analyze but just remind you of your huge fan base. love you brother, b