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paper cut

Reading the magazine,
(Times)
I see mostly articles of
world disasters.
My brother pulled the magazine from me -
cutting my hands!
Blood is dripping on the 
floor,
so here i am like the people in the
articles;
shocked and despair with 
multiple paper cuts.

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  1. Date: 8/19/2009 12:26:00 PM

    That is good. I like the way life transforms into paper/pen. In this case keyboard to screen. Good Luck

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 12:00:00 PM

    Much to think about in this one. Good use of imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 8/15/2009 9:47:00 AM

    You did it great, Diogenes! Awesome "Write(Now)"... Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 3:16:00 PM

    Thought provoking, the comparisions....and written in a flash!! Great job! ~ Carrie

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 2:31:00 PM

    Amazingly witty, Good luck Diogenes! Sincerely Moses

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 10:49:00 AM

    nicely done, good luck!!