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Lets Make Sense Of What You Did

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Lets Make Sense Of What You Did

What you did was wrong
You suffocated it in all thats white
You then let it burn up
You let it melt
You took your knife
You Cut it open

Im sorry poor unborn chickies





































This guy wanted his oatmeal:Quick

So lets make sense of what you did:
Its all wrong!


**For my vegetarian buddies=) Im no veggie Girl But i think you do a good cause=p**

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  1. Date: 8/14/2009 3:25:00 AM

    But, I like Green Eggs and Ham. I'm no veggie, Sam I am. Saj you are, would you like a candy bar?

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 5:13:00 PM

    Chuckle, chuckle, Moses

  1. Date: 8/12/2009 4:32:00 AM

    Sajdah, Oh my there for a minute I had no idea what was going on. Excellent writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 1:07:00 PM

    This is a very interesting piece...you had me with this write....good work.