Career Move by Tim Ryerson


Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/7/2010 8:42:00 AM funny and sad! Starting way at the back. I can't recall your poems I have read already. Best to begin back here! Luv, andrea
Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/19/2010 5:05:00 PM a sad tail ;) Light & Love
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 1/16/2010 9:19:00 AM Today I am taking the time to enjoy myself reading some of my favorite poems. Your poem, Career Move is one of my favorites. Thanks for writing it. I enjoyed reading it, again. Lovingly, Dane Ann
Raul Moreno Date: 9/13/2009 2:35:00 AM Nice work Tim, I see the Iambic Pentameter meter in the lines...it's hard to see 'cause the lines are broken in half. Overall it's a great poem...Raul
Debbie Guzzi Date: 8/28/2009 11:26:00 AM you know half the time I can't "hear" the stressed syllable & the other half I can make any slyable stressed...and the 3rd half LOL I can't seem to count feet????? No wonder I'm snaggin...if ' is a stress...-(no) '(won) -(der) ' (I'm) - (snag) '(in)...I think that's 3 feet???? not 5 and I'm not sure if it's stressed as above? or 'no,'won,-der??? H E L P LOL Liked the verse anyway!
Adeleke Adeite Date: 8/22/2009 7:43:00 AM This is a wonderful, awesome piece; I love every bit of it. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
Date: 8/21/2009 6:24:00 PM Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. This is an enjoyable piece with a bit of humor. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
Ruben O. Date: 8/20/2009 5:23:00 PM Congratulations on being featured this week!! Good job, Tim! Ruben.
J B Date: 8/19/2009 11:15:00 PM I love this.JB
diane christian Date: 8/19/2009 4:56:00 AM congratulations on your featured poem, God bless you from diane
James Fraser Date: 8/18/2009 12:27:00 PM Congratulations on being featured>>James
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Date: 8/18/2009 11:02:00 AM Tim, I'm going to favorite this one. It is relevant and well spoken. Excellent write. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Lovingly, Dane
Veronica Joseph Date: 8/17/2009 10:23:00 AM HA! Love it ! Congrats on your featured work. Its that revelation where you want to smack yourself on the head! Well done....
J B Date: 8/17/2009 6:36:00 AM Congrats on being featured. Good write! JB
Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 8/17/2009 4:50:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Tim. Love Carol
Sara Kendrick Date: 7/26/2009 2:56:00 PM Nice and funny Iambic Pentameter. Sara
Date: 7/26/2009 12:34:00 PM So much said with an interesting perspective in just four lines. The rhyme works well. I enjoyed it. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen

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