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The journey (Motto)

Like the tortoise, be gentle, take small steps – go far

Inspired by Brian Strand's  (Motto/Monuku) contest

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  1. Date: 7/28/2009 2:23:00 PM

    Made me chuckle at the little tortoises legs, truthfull statement if ever i heard one, excellent Krista>>James

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 8:05:00 AM

    Good message in this poem. And, sometimes it is just one step at a time. Good luck in the contest! Keep on writing. Karen

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 1:07:00 AM

    So true Krista.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/25/2009 2:19:00 AM

    A very well written monoku possessing very sage advice. Krista, it is a pleasure to have read for you and I thank you for your welcome comments on my poem. God Bless, always, Adell

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 12:07:00 PM

    like the dove, be patient, spread your wings - take fly. very good monuko. Diogenes

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 11:32:00 AM

    this is a good monuku. chek out some of my poems