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You Touched Me

You touched me as the sunlight
     on the birth of a new day
You touched me as the firelight
     in a soft and gentle way
You touched me as the starlight
     from the calm heavens above
You touched me as the moonlight
     with a gentle kiss of love.

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  1. Date: 6/20/2012 5:22:00 PM

    an excellent and I was going to say very touching but I guess that would be reiterating a bit! : ) A beautifully written poem and of course deserrving of its place in glory. Congratulations Trudy

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 2:10:00 PM

    Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:33:00 AM

    no, this poem touched me. Well deserve win. *smiles* Ron

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 5:17:00 AM

    Congrats on your 1st place win perfect poem luv vie

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 12:38:00 PM

    Beautiful poem Trudy.Congrats on your 1st place win!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:37:00 AM

    Thank you all! And thank you Brian for another great contest~!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 11:33:00 AM

    Congratulations on your win in Brian's "#183" contest Trudy. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 10:58:00 AM

    Wonderful... Congratulations... Terry

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 7:57:00 AM

    Just beautiful. BIG congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 7:38:00 AM

    Congratulations on your winning poem, a beautiful and peacefull read.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 6:49:00 AM

    a graceful read.. congrats on your special win, trudy..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 5:51:00 AM

    Wow, simply beautiful! Trudy, this lovely poem is soft and romantic. I love it!! Congrats on your win. Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 5:02:00 AM

    Trudy-Congrats on this first place gem.

  1. Date: 10/20/2009 8:27:00 AM

    Hi, thanks for your comment on my poem, I enjoyed reading yours as well. Romantically said with words flowing from one's heart. Continuted success!! Donielle S.

  1. Date: 8/17/2009 2:56:00 AM

    Love expressed fully...wonderful piece from the heart...we all long to be "touched" this way

  1. Date: 7/27/2009 6:09:00 PM

    very romantic and lovely.. sunlight, firelight, starlight moonlight.. aaah ... that is love..for sure

  1. Date: 7/26/2009 8:45:00 AM

    What a dreamy poem Trudy, so beautiful>>James

  1. Date: 7/24/2009 7:01:00 AM

    wonderful write with interesting imageries, you are such a creative writer... keep the flag flying... keep sharing you thoughts here... great you! adeleke

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 8:52:00 PM

    this is really good!

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 8:11:00 PM

    excellent , well written :)

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 7:33:00 PM

    Very gentle and moving. I love all the images you use to convey your love. This special poem has "touched me" as well. Beautiful words in a delightful rhyme form! Great work, Trudy. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/23/2009 5:46:00 PM

    Sweet and lovely....a nice one Trudy!! ~ Carrie