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Expire the Eye Walker
. Expire the Eye Walker
Creeping amongst the lash of nights eye = 9
He ignores around it, making dry = 9
Pulling the lids back with both fists = 8
As he skids across our eyes mist = 8
He causes bursts of replay = 7
Credible to some, at day = 7
Yet fixated are we = 6
On the sand we can’t see = 6
Annoying to some = 5
We’ll pick till it comes = 5
Love at a glance = 4
Sandman’s romance = 4
Most review = 3
His walk through = 3
To find = 2
He’s blind = 2
Grain =1
Brained =1
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This is a “Mock Bowler” poem
Each
stanza reduces
syllable count beginning
with nine and ending with one
The form “Mock Bowler”, created
by Sandra Hudson, resembles the
pins at the end of a bowling lane
Each two-line stanza has the
same syllable count and
stanzas must rhyme
last words
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