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Everything Is Not So Right.

Graduation night.
Everything was so right.
But you wouldn't know,
You were a no show.

I cried myself to sleep that night.
I held it in so long,
the tears blurred my sight.

You broke my heart that day.
Into a million little pieces i would say.
Never fail to let me down.
But no longer will I frown.

I have paid my dues,
and I no longer have any respect for you.

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  1. Date: 7/15/2009 9:04:00 PM

    a very sad piece and horrible action by some hurtful person to leave you stranded that way,,, I could feel both the hurt and anger written witin,,blessings..Cecil

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 3:53:00 AM

    Candice, this is truly a sad sad write. But hold your head high and be proud of yourself. Outstanding write. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 10:10:00 AM

    sharp way of identifying yourself! I like it. You're a monument of great poetry! Good luck!

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 3:51:00 PM

    so sad, good poem :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2009 3:50:00 PM

    You graduated into a strong woman, Candice! Enjoy your independence, and keep us posted!