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He didn't get it


"Where are you he asked"

In my head I said

He got angry

Cause he couldn’t get there

Told him no one could

The bridge was burned

In a fire in 04

A bad winter, you know

He didn’t get it


"You’re backwards in things you say"

But you know what I mean

When I say them

Now don’t get so wounded

It’s just a character evaluation


 The way he fidgets

Gives me the church giggles

And that boy gets so mad

I don’t care

Wonder how red he’ll get

When I get up to

Leave

He won’t see

He’s looking over his shoulder at another boy

Another to chase after


"Where are you he asked"

In my head I said

Now don’t get so wounded

It’s just a character evaluation

And that boy gets so mad

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  1. Date: 7/30/2009 6:18:00 PM

    it's good but don't just write one! :p keep going let creativity flow when you can!

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 4:26:00 AM

    Hello and welcome to our family here at PoetrySoup Jonathan. Good writing. Hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 5:12:00 PM

    Funny. Nice work. Sara