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Born on the 13th

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Born on the 13th

Born on the 13th –     
must be fortunate –
of May, she`s not scared
and ever stays playful.

She grasps firmly springs
and jumps cause of mercy
into the gist of humble, 
the very observation.

Belittled the devilry,
touched by the fortune
she's glad that a man
fathomed her dreams.

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  1. Date: 7/17/2010 7:16:00 AM

    yes all is not always as predicted..such is life! Light 7 Love

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 2:23:00 AM

    Interesting verse. Changed the ordinary into extraordinary. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 9/9/2009 7:32:00 PM

    whimsical! wonderful!,and thanks for comments! Oleg! "into the gist of humble" well done!!!!

  1. Date: 9/8/2009 12:31:00 PM

    Belirus? wow not quiete sure where that is? somewhere which once was behind the Iron Curtain? Slovic? And who is the brave damsel above? Perhaps you can give me a dialect verse for my contest? Let me hear how your voice sounds speaking English? Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/8/2009 4:05:00 AM

    Oleg, what an interesting look into ones life in a few lines. Excellent writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/7/2009 12:10:00 PM

    I liked your choice of words implemented to express yourself... good job.....JP