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Loveless Days

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Loveless Days

Blood spilled upon the British skies
Her eyes drained my soul
Asserted love in bad places has forever taken over

I leave the stoned windowed motel without anymore wishes
I pray for nothing now

I couldn't tell if it was morning birth or noon exposed
I jump the scene and the cold moments looking to hang onto sharpened blue clouds

You've burned me woman
You've pressed the flame upon my skin-analyzed my thoughts and sin,preached to all the
broken men,men like me who move with wind

But we're gone aren't we baby?


Her eyes drained my soul
Blood spilled upon the British skies
I died on your Monday evening

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  1. Date: 2/22/2010 11:29:00 AM

    wow this was a great piece i loved the imagery and and the topic it was sad in a pretty way.loved it. =)Jo

  1. Date: 9/10/2009 3:26:00 AM

    Very descriptive writing. Keep writing. Sara

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 10:21:00 AM

    "I leave the stoned windowed motel without anymore wishes/I pray for nothing now"... fantastic! and this one: "I died on your Monday evening"... awesome lines, my friend. Excellent poem. Ruben.