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Arrows... ...and bow Cupid directs ensuring fate guaranting hope Idyllic joint knocking late my nocturnal oddity Persistence quick revives skeptic thoughts, unable vestiges within xeric yearlong zone
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  1. Date: 3/22/2014 1:29:00 AM

    I like how you equated this one with Cupid. With those sunglasses there, you look like a playful little Cupid yourself!!

  1. Date: 5/27/2010 7:34:00 AM

    EXCELLENT!! xeric????? (have to go get my dictionary!!) lol......... Congratulations on another winning poem!!! :)

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 4:57:00 PM

    Congrats on your HM in the ABC contest.. excellent poem my friend.. enjoy your honor.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 5/26/2010 1:00:00 PM

    congrats!

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 6:17:00 PM

    Nice. Looks very difficult. I enjoyed reading. Marty

  1. Date: 8/7/2009 4:00:00 PM

    I had to check it out, and you did excellent. I had a hard time finding words to fit especially with x and z

  1. Date: 7/19/2009 4:58:00 AM

    Very nice Ruben. Incorporating a dry habitat into to this thiought is profound. Thank you Bill

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 11:31:00 PM

    Dear Ruben, You no doubt have flawless thought, and have great ability to deliver good stuff. I like a lot of your poems. do keep writing them. Sincere regards, Prince Freakasso

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 4:26:00 PM

    I loved the abc.

  1. Date: 7/15/2009 3:48:00 AM

    GREAT.. .love it Ruben.. doing mighty fine. Greetz Gwen

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 4:19:00 PM

    I have never seen this style but I love this piece. I just have to look up the word xeric. :)

  1. Date: 7/14/2009 2:12:00 AM

    This is great Ruben, I didn't even realize it was ABC until I got to the end.

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 8:02:00 PM

    You are now my Robin Hood. Send those passionate arrows my way, Ruben. Sorrry it took me so long to read this one as it is truly exceptional! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 12:22:00 AM

    I love your writing Ruben. :) Hugs my friend. You always catch me smiling, yes.

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 7:47:00 PM

    @.@ last line rocks @.@ the whole poem does jojojo thanks a lot for the experience yei!!!=D

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 6:50:00 PM

    My Dear Brother Ruben, Exceptional Write I have one ABC POEM SO hard to do YOU ,Brother have mastered it Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comment on "Ihank-YOU-- My LOVES" YOU are One of Many that have stood behindme on this Wonderful Journey of LOVE YOUR LOVING Brother ALWAYS...Harry

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 5:58:00 PM

    I think it carries the message well Ruben. the incomplete one is skeptic at night because of a yearlong dry spell. it's easy as abc, 123, baby you and me... little J5 reference there:)

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 1:02:00 PM

    mmmaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillllllllllllllllllllll

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 6:35:00 AM

    Interesting. Sara

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 5:17:00 AM

    This is great! I know how difficult it is to write anABC poem. Very nice. One question, Ruben, do you live in an arid (xeric) region?

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